ตัวอย่างการตรวจ English Proofreading & Editing ชุดที่ 17

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For a several years where the provision bring to law in the UK to disrepute, even in practice the courts have attempted to moderate the harness effect of the law by interpretation the warranties to be strictly and taking the purely technical point by allowing to do justice in some individual cases.

This provision has brought UK law into disrepute; however, the courts have attempted to moderate the effects by not enforcing a strict interpretation of the warranties in individual cases.

Because: Increased clarity of meaning and word count greatly reduced