ตัวอย่างการตรวจ English Proofreading & Editing ชุดที่ 10

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However, it does not mean that food production of the developed countries are not be impacted by climate change. As the case study of the US, though US has many advantages, such as better technology, the stability of economics status, their food productions are also impacted.

Food production in developed countries will be affected by climate change. The US has many advantages such as better technology and a stable economy; however, their food production will also be impacted.

Because: Improved clarity of desired meaning with important points placed first in the sentences.Reduction in number of words by 30%.